Share Why It Matters If your goal is to land an agent, pique the interest of a producer, or cause an actor to proclaim, "I have to play this role", you have no choice but to come out with guns blazing from Page One. Agents, producers, actors, contest script readers -- or whomever you are lucky enough to get your script in front of -- will give you ten minutes of their time. In fact, I firmly believe they'll give you five.
Subscribe to our FREE email newsletter and download free character development worksheets! Guest Column March 28, DVpitthe Twitter pitch event for marginalized creators, is returning for its fifth run this April. So how do you write strong action scenes? Not sure how to write a fight scene that works?
First, think about what the fight scene does.
Does it advance the plot? If so, how, and why? Or does it show us the character s? And if so, how?
Action scenes need a point beyond flying fists or explosions: Make sure that the action scenes work with the story as a whole. This is just as true for sex scenes as fight scenes, by the way—tab A into slot B is not particularly intriguing.
As per the above, really avoid just having a list of actions and responses, strikes and blocks, etc. Consider, is the move in character? Again, Han shooting first and Indy shooting the swordsman both fit the characters.
Besides the humor, it would have felt weird for something long and involved and complicated. Like the long hallway shot in Daredevil season 1, try not to break the action! I remember reading one submission where vampires are pouring into the room to attack the main character… and then next scene was a flashback that defused the tension completely for me.
Then watch out for opposite issue, aka geeking out about techniques and subtleties in too much detail.
A high-level Gracie jujitsu or kendo match is riveting if you know what the combatants are doing. Words are hard, I need pictures: Contrast those with the fight scenes in another Keanu Reeves classic, The Matrix. Still good fight scenes on a technical level, but with a completely different feel.
One thing the recent Atomic Blonde did well was how one of the biggest fight scenes ended with the two combatants lying on the floor utterly exhausted, and the winner managed to move first. But even in the opening scene, the action is still about the story and character: I trusted one person in the entire world.
He was currently punching me in the face. The action scene continues from there, but I was already hooked…. When in doubt, reading the sentences out loud works just as well for action scenes as it does for dialogue—if you get stuck, the reader probably will too.
These are great notes for making sure the action in your novel is keeping readers on the edge of their seats, and definitely check out the rest of the blog hop links on the resources page!
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Writer and licensed therapist Dan J. Marder offers some sage advice on how to take the opening of your action script to another level. My first novel was written in the past tense, and once again I’m writing a fictional crime memoir primarily in the past tense.
However, when the protagonist gets to the action he’s suddenly in the present tense. A not always very easy to read, but practical copy & paste format has been chosen throughout this manual.
In this format all commands are represented in code boxes, where the comments are given in blue metin2sell.com save space, often several commands are . Today’s post includes excerpts from What’s the Story?Building Blocks for Fiction Writing, chapter nine: “Chapters, Scenes, and Sequences.”Enjoy!
Chapters, scenes, and sequences are structural units of . Description is something that gets in the way of many authors.
Why? Well, because it's so darn hard to write. And no wonder. If you're not careful, descriptive sequences can become static, even dull. Writing action and dialogue is so much more fun. On top of that, description incorporates so many.